Professional Review
Who
The review night had many professionals reviewing people projects and providing feedback. Many of the professionals were matched up with similar projects as there profession.
What
This night was very helpful to everyone working on a project. The reviewers provided a ton of feedback which helped us to improve our projects.
When
The review night took place on February 16,
6:30 - 9:00pm
Feedback
I got a lot of feedback after the review night. It pushed me to keep researching when I realized I didn't have the answer to a lot of the questions they had. I kept on researching until I could answer each question they left me with. I started my ideas with multiple little cylinders for each family that were connected with tunnels. I decided to change it after some comments I got.
Thank you
Dear Mr. John,
I am thankful for your time and feedback on my Sub-Martian Living project. I took into consideration what you said about my research. I will definitely change my focus on the lack of air and how to acquire it, the super cold temperature, and how to obtain water. Those pieces of feedback will be my main focus. I noticed you liked how it was underground due to the temperature and materials. I intended to make it underground because of the radiation but with the cold temperatures it reinforced the idea and confirmed that it was the best solution.
I am going to take this feedback and will continue my research on the essential living factors like air, water, and temperature control. I’ve done a little more research since the Professional Review night on the Moxie and I think that it would be the best option. I haven’t looked into the RASSOR yet, or how to get water, but there is another way to do it, called electrolysis. I will do some more research on this and make the decision on what the best option would be. The building I'm creating will have the Moxie incorporated into it and it'll be the main air source.
Once again, thank you for your time and helpful feedback on my project. The STEAM Expo is on May 18th at 6:30 and I hope you can come and see how I incorporated your feedback into the final product.
Sincerely,
Paige Schultz, Anoka High School